captaindomdude

Stupid Review day not letting me post it. I wrote this and rewrote parts of it, yet I still feel a tad nervous about it. Please don't be ungodly harsh. ...

Stupid Review day not letting post it. I wrote this and rewrote parts of it, yet I still feel a tad nervous about it. Please don't be ungodly harsh. Chapter ...

I can't believe I missed this story until now. It seems really fascinating, you have such an interesting world here. However, I felt like your plot was...poorly delivered. I understand ...

Hey, still enjoying your work. It's light and easy, which is a welcome break. Really the only thing I saw here were some general technical errors. “His ringtone, Secrets. If ...

I enjoyed the change of pace this chapter brought. It really conveyed a very nice emotion to the piece, rather then dark hopelessness of the chapters before it, this one ...

An excellent work. You did works cited perfectly, grammar is excellent, everything technical about the essay was excellently done. You analyzed the work very nicely; I felt like I knew ...

As the person above said,there's a possibility here. I'll give you that. The most obvious thing about this is its length. This is not a chapter. This is a paragraph. ...

I like this. Normally when a fanfiction is written it's written with only one fan story. You've got like 7, 8?. It's a really good idea. I also like how ...

Alright, two things. First, I wrote this a few years ago, so if you are expecting the exact same quality as my apocalypse novel, well, don't get your hopes up. ...

Alright, two things. First, I wrote this a few years ago, so if you are expecting the exact same quality as my apocalypse novel, well, don't get your hopes up. ...

I will say I like the idea of the story, something involving hellhounds is interesting. I mean, normally hellhounds are simply demons people use as monsters to kill, so this ...

Well, it was poem, I'll give you that. I agree with the person above me. Your rhyming felt a little forced, like you didn't rhyme because it fit the poem, ...

Hey, I saw your thread and was wondering if you would what I've written of my novel. It's called Apocalypse: what now?. I'll post a link at the bottom of ...

Not much to say other then to agree with the person above me, very excellent work. I do say I like how uncensored your writing is. There is nothing wrong ...

An excellent work. I don't know if this is reflecting your actual feelings or just a story, but either way, I enjoyed it. You portrayed it in a way that ...