captaindomdude

An thouroughly interesting work! I really enjoyed the interaction between the two characters, and how mysterious everything was. Excellent job, I would like to see other adventures with these characte

I wanted to wait until I read all the chapters before commenting, and now that I have, bravo. This is a very nice work. You keep the action going. You ...

Alright, It's been awhile since I posted a new chapter, but school kinda got in the way. Warning, this has some...unique dialects, but please bear with it, it shouldn't be ...

Alright, It's been awhile since I posted a new chapter, but school kinda got in the way. Warning, this has some...unique dialects, but please bear with it, it shouldn't be ...

Another poem I had to do for english, this one entered in the BAR Law day poetry contest. The theme for this one was 'No courts, no justice, no freedom' ...

I have to say that this is a very interesting work. I like the overall plot, it seems pretty original. I applaud you for one thing, there weren't that many ...

This was a poem I did about a month ago for a poetry contest I was entered in by my english teacher. I haven't uploaded anything recently, but I'm a ...

I remember what it's like to be a new writer, so I feel your pain. I can tell you that is a pretty decent start. Let's start with the technical ...

Once again, great work Para. You did an excellent job, and this story is coming out nicely. I have to say I was a little worried about the attack in ...

Well....I would like to say something nice here. That way I don't feel quite so....bad about telling you that this is really, really not that great. Let's start with your ...

A very nice story! You did really well with this, great job. The biggest thing I noticed was your progression, how natural it felt. A lot of times it's difficult ...

The second half to my latest not-really-short story. Again, different style from my normal writing, and set in my apocalypse novel's world. Part 2 “Again, I’m sure you found this ...

This is done in a much different style then what i normally write. I didn't do it as an experiment, it just seemed like the best way to portray the ...

Well done on the story. It was elegantly told, you used the right language at mostly the right time, and it flowed very nicely. Actually, that's something I want to ...

Whoo! Once again, enjoying this piece. I love the Noir feel to it, It makes it a really entertaining read. That, and you aren't afraid to broach topics that are ...