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And welcome back! :D

Claire's open to alliances! (Probably other carreers, but who knows) Are we going to start with training or in the actual games?

My profile: Name: Claire Adamson Age: 14 Gender: Girl District: 2 Appearance/Picture: 5"4, very thin/malnourished. Dark circles from not enough sleep, but clear skin. Dirty blond hair and green-gray e

No time to post my profile now, but I'd like to be a girl from district 2, please. (wow, it's been 1.5 years since I've joined a storybook. O.o) (edit) ...

Hi there, Meep:)! I'm going to try not to repeat what others have already said. I love the way you executed this piece, and the idea was touching to say ...

I agree with Rosey to some extent, except the second question--I think its a lack of logic, actually, or the ability to relate certain things with eachother in ways others ...

Hello! I don't think I've ever seen something of yours before, so this should be fun! I think the others have got most of the typos, so I just have ...

*applauds* Amen! :D

Hi again! I do think it's much better now. :D Especially the cliched bits--I really like the edits you did. Actually, I did find one thing that I missed last ...

Hi again! I do like the change in POV, since it makes the "she won't remember" bit less awkward. However, there are a few 1st person bits left in--such as ...

*Gasps* someone here to ask for a review? In this thread? No way! Heh, actually it's already done! So, any more takers?

Hi! Here to review as requested. My first thoughts, upon reading this, were "uh-oh, another fantasy in which the female MC must prove her worthiness/another fantasy in which the main ...

*bumpity bump bump bump* I'm open for buisness!

Hi there! I love this--it's very cute, and the writing's stunning. I just got tripped up in one spot: But what I don’t know is that, once the tears dry ...

Guess. :D. Of course, it *is* spelled wrong. But it's stuck now, so I can't change it.