canislupis

pretty good. One comment is that the link you posted didn't work when I clicked on them, one got me to the homepage and the other didn't exsist. Just me? ...

Well, I found the same things wrong with this as I did with the first one. (See my review) I think you definitely need to space out your posts, since ...

This was ok, but kindof boring. You don't need to space it out so much, and it has almost a dry, reporting of facts kindof feeling. I know this is ...

hmmm, it seems that misty didn't like it much, and we can tell it didn't hold her attention to long since she seems to think that the sotry is from ...

hehehe, this was well written and hilarious. There are a few minor punctuational and grammatical errors, but nothing to serious. I was just reading that there actually IS a holiday ...

This was pretty good. In some parts you are missing a period, or the sentence just trails off. try running a punctuation check in microsoft word. it will probably help ...

This was okay, it had good characters, (and by that I mean well developed)and the whole thing wasn't too bad. Your dialogue is forced and unrealistic and there are punctuation ...

This was ok, but confusing and repeptetive. I won't list all the grammatical errors, but all the same it needs a good edit. You also need to make it clear ...

I thought this was really good. The first cresent was a little information droppy, but this one was much better. the dialogue sounds great and the story flows nicely. PM ...

this wasn't the most original piece, but for the mosr part it was well written. I agree with the previous reviewer on the confusion part. ;) The way you posted ...

This was funny and almost acurate.:) The previous reviewer summed it up pretty nicely, but I had a few things to add. The ending is kind of weird. Rearrange some ...

OK, pirate, This was very good... I am really creeped out by this . YOu have an excelent idea, and it was well written with fairly good description. Wow, this ...

Thanks for the reviews! This was a story I wrote about three years ago, and I haven't really edited it. I'll be editing soon.... Azila: How did you find out ...

WE ALL DO love cheese! hehehehe this was good. I like the anothology idea, why don't you do it??????

This was ok, interesting in that it's pink. straighten out the grammar and punctuation.