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Hi! I'm not sure exactly what the county is, but I'm not really familiar with the area anyway :) I currently am living in Washington, in the US, but I'm ...

Ok, this has me a little confused. First she's remembering when she "escaped" from the coven, and for once eluded the guards. and then she's reliving a time when she ...

Hello kitty! I'm not from England, but it's possible that I'll move there next year. it'd be to a place called Middle Wallop. You've probably never heard of that, but ...

Hi! I'm homeschooled too. from your posts it looks like you have been for your whole life. I like it. Except my non-homeschooled friends are always quizing me. :)

AWWWW! *Snifs and blows nose* Anyway, I liked this. The emotion is well portrayed. But, you NEED to fix the errors. I also suggest finding a title for it. Anything ...

HI! Sorry I confused. :) I meant that the whole thing seems spaced out and planned, there are rhyming sylables, and the whole thing sounds rather like poetry when you ...

Short stories are quick to read and fun to review. Tiny stories are not. :) There is a fine line between too long a story, and too shorta piece, but ...

Okay, this was odd. I liked the last sentence. :)

This was good! most of the suggestions I would have made have already been pointed out. But this felt realistic and it flowed well. I like the way you switched ...

Thanks so much! Your reviews were really helpful. Some of the problems with tense may be because I actually first wrote this in present, but then I switched it back. ...

This is something I put together recently, but I think it needs something. I don't like it much how it is, but I'm not sure how to make it better. ...

Hi This looks like a great idea. I'll go there now and see what I can do.

This was pretty good! I would suggest finding a different, more original name for your MC. Steel is a bit stereotypic.... Anyway, this was well written and it kept me ...

Great job! I have to say that this is one of my favorite pieces that you've posted so far. The descriptions are great and the imagery is fantastic, and you ...

Odd in a good way? Obviously SOMEONE thinks like that, since I wrote it like that :) Anyway, thanks for telling me your opinion.