canislupis

Hi! Here is the requested review, and sorry it took so long. xD Holiday craziness, and all that. It’s still cold. It’s the 14th of July, but it’s a freezing ...

Charlie  Austin told me that I’d forget about it. He said that it didn’t matter. He said that running would stop my mind from crashing. Austin lied. My best mate ...

Hi Tiger! Thanks so much. I have edited since then, and am now down to 1992 words. :D So thanks! That was very helpful. Just a few things: Clara's Narrative ...

Hi Tiger! If/When you have time, I'm looking for opinions on my (brilliantly titled :roll:) piece: Titleless Possible 3-Pronged Contest Entry Thanks! I'd really appreciate it. :D I don't really ...

Claire I knew not to drink the water. I knew it, and I did it anyway. It was delicious--the lake water, while murky, isn't slimy like the puddles were. As ...

Crack. It sounded from behind him, yet yet? Unnecessary word. struck his back with a piercing snap. The wince that was soon to follow Try “his wince brought... brought a ...

Hi! Sorry I didn't tell you about this. :D I just felt sortof inspired after taling to you last night, and... voila! Anyway, that was a very, very helpful review ...

My name is Clara Stevenson. On April 14, 2001 I crashed into this nameless lake. Somehow, I dragged myself out of the wrecked plane and swam to shore. I am ...

Thanks, Yuriiko! That was fun. Anyone else?

Claire Adamson This is it. We're going to die. How many times have I thought that? Too many. But before it was just me. And now, I actually feel like ...

Right, Yuri, here is your review! First, I did some nit-picky stuff line by line. Edited version is in the spoilers, comments in bold. :D Your heart is beating fast. ...

Claire Adamson It didn't take me long to smell it after that, and I understood, finally. I picked up the pace as well as I could, but it was hard--I ...

Claire Adamson "Listen. We're standing over one of the most dangerous spots to be. We need to move." I say, quietly. She's not listening to me, I can tell. "Can ...

Claire Adamson My breath comes a little faster as I stand, perfectly still, watching the girl in front of me. Her eyes are nervous, and she's not holding the knife ...

Claire Adamson I pause under the shade of a decrepit building, palms clenching and stomach cramping. I can't do this--I'm just not strong enough. The steady panic that I've felt ...