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Re: Roses Cannot Die
I'm glad to see that you edited this! It's better now. I think, coming back to this, that other reviewers may have been a bit too harsh, since this was ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: This World
I have to say I actually enjoyed reading this. It has a good, if depressing, point, and though it was ackward in some parts, I still like it. I'm not ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Blood Moon
Yeah, this is really intresting! I can feel the potential dripping......:) PM me if you continue this, pretty please?
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Moonlight Sea Gull: Chapter 1
Ok, besides the point Twit has, (which I think is a good one) I noticed numerous errors throughout this piece. So, here is my indepth critique. :) A light breeze ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Gwen and Ayra- crazy photos
Cool! Nice special effects. The only one I could actually tell what your faces looked like was the last one. :) Overall, nice!
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Ayra's attempt at poetry- Nameless
Nice rythm! I think overall it flowed pretty smoothly. THe one comment I have, besides the ones already posted, was that there seems to be a very quick transition between ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Heart -Chapter (?)
You can just copy the three posts you just made and put them on the first one, and then delete the separate ones. :D It would make it a bit ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Heart - Read me
Hah. I mostly like drawing and writing/reading about them.....
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: A Winter Midnight
Nice, but I agree about making it longer. Also, is it Midnight or Twilight? I see how its possible for it to be both, but it still was confusing when ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Heart - Read me
hiya! This sounds really interesting. Your title caught my eye cus I've been writing a piece called "Wild Heart" about wolves (Yes, I am kinda obsessed with them).... kinda similar, ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Depredation of Nightmares Chapter 3
Nice! This was a good chapter. Most of it seems to be focused on the fight thought. I really like the way you have the two opposite natures fighting inside ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Whisperings over Africa's plains (1)
Yeah! Great title, it really caught my attention. I would suggest posting a longer bit, this doesn't really give us much action. :) Its a good size for a prologue ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Wild Heart
EDITED!!! Comments plz?
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: Just Doing My Job
Huh? Its not THAT bad...... Why say that? if you really don't like it, just delete it off the site!!!!!! Besides, isn't that kinda the point of this site? You ...
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: painting, please critique
This is amazing!! Very realistic. I can't wait to see other paitings that you do. I wish I could paint like that....
Nov 19, 2007