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Is it too late to join? I'm guessing it is, but if not could you PM me? Thnx.

Oops, Thanks. :D

Hmm, this may have already been said, but this is the "Prologue" of what? It would get more reviews if it had a title. :D

Yeah! I echo that........ ;)

I'm surprised that more people haven't reviewed this, I thought it was pretty good. :D

Guess not... Now I feel hurt..... :) Thanks anyway, Azila. :D

Cool! You have a lot of people already..... Name: Selena Wake Gender: Female Year:2nd House: Ravenclaw Appearance: Bright green almond shaped eyes, dark brown hair and angular features. Personality: H

This definitely had promise, and I think I have to disagree with Meep: "Don't use your age as an excuse I think my opinnion may be slightly biased on that ...

Yeah, I'm DYING!!!! :) Really really nice development..... I don't really have much to say. You are doing a very good job with this. :D I can only hope that ...

Uggh. It was pretty sound from a writing point of view, but it was really morbid. :) Maybe rate this PG at then say something in the descriptions? This is ...

Oh, yeah I wrote A short story with the name Tala a while ago. I guess I could recycle it! I'm pretty sure I'm going to use Wenonah, just because ...

I've had it. :D It actually tastes ok, though in my opinion it reminds me a bit of furniture polish. :lol: No fense' though. :D

Oh. Well... I guess there are multiple ways of pronouncing it. :D I usually say it "Day-yous" I actually just changed her name, after re-looking up it's origins. I originally ...

Thanks all! I've also posted two bits after this, if you want to read them. Snoink: Thanks! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. I used this for NaNo, and ...

Good point! I definitely see where you are coming from.... Little errors need to be taken care of though........ Here is my critique: Have you heard the phrase, "Walk a ...