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This made me cry. :cry: really sweet, I liked the message. Some minor grammatical and spelling errors which should be sorted out however. :D My mother is my best friend ...

Oooh, yeah. Thanks. I'll get to work on that right away.... About that first paragraph, I see what you mean.... and I don't know how it happened. :oops: It used ...

Haha, I don't think so...... :lol: It took us a month to settle on it!

Hi again! Here is chapter two, part one. Please read the first three parts before reading this, as it will make much more sense! you can get to them through ...

Good point........:lol:

Yeah, definitely work on some of your spelling and grammar. :roll: I liked this though, it gave me a pretty good image inside my head, at least of the rat's ...

Hi! I finally got here early enough to get to review this first! MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! ;) First of all, I really liked this chapter. It had some iteresting developments, even if ...

Again, you need to break this up into smaller bits. Its very discouraging to try and rea d the whole thing. An in-depth critique has already been done, but I ...

Pretty good! What is this Fanfiction of? I'd suggest making separate threads for each of the chapters, and also fix the spacing, so there's a separate line between paragraphs and ...

Ummm, you mispelled "Jewels" in the title. That's definitely a repellent to people who see this and might want to read it. :D I also noticed an error here: Are ...

You are an amazing artist. Something about the angle of the jaw seems a bit odd, but that could be just me. :D I wish I could paint like that.....

Why? I think I'd rather keep it myself, but with that other meaning..... I dunno. I'm pretty attached to it. :lol:

Thanks everyone! I think I might post the next bit once I edit it. Fangala: Your suggestions are very helpful. There is one sentence that does mention that he gets ...

Thanks soo much!!!! I'll try to add more action to this part. :D About the pain in her leg, she IS a wolf in her dreams, but in the end ...

Thanks! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. Gwenevire: Good Idea! I'll get to work on that.... :D Fangala: Yeah, I know. Sorry it was hard to read, but the ...