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Tallulah Blood Mountain A growl sounded deep in Tallulah's throat as she scented the breeze. She was standing on a rough outcropping of rock, trying to distinguish the multitude of ...

Ok, I guess.... Who's the alpha then?

Hi Mommy!!!! ;) Can I also be the alpha male of the mystics? seeing as nobody has claimed it yet...

ooh! cool story book. Its just like the other one though. (Layleun) Heres mine: Name:Tallulah Pack: Blood Mountain Rank: Alpha female? Age: four years Mate: dead Pups: Can I be ...

53,068!!! I really wasn't expecting it. :D I did most of it early on.....

YAY!!! I'm glad thats ok with you.... If we can have two characters, maybe one of us could also be our mother (that's if it's not already taken cus' it ...

Name: Naira Rank: Pup, (by the way, I thought that there was only one beta per pack, plus a few older pups and an omega, but oh well.) Pack: Can ...

ok.... I'm lost...... I kinda forgot about this. Oh well.... What did I miss? it looks like everybody is still on the train.....

Haha, thanks Ayra. I sure they're not that bad! ;)

Thanks everyone for the helpful reviews! It looks like bunny 1 is winning..... :D

I agree with Snoink about the adjectives, and with chocoholic about getting it moved to other fiction, but it looks like you might have already done so..... The one thing ...

Uggghhhh... I really enjoyed reading the books, but from the trailer it looks like its going to be pretty bad and actionized. :D I would strongly urge ANYONE who is ...

Thanks. :D

I'm back! here is my critique: :) frowned when I heard the True’s voice. The? I think you meant "heard True's voice" The repetition of "True" in this paragraph was ...

I don't have much time, so I'm afraid I'll just be able to critique the prologue. This was a very interesting idea, and it was pretty well carried out. But, ...