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Is this storybook officially dead? And it just started! Come on, it was just getting fun!

urggh, it looks like nobody else is interested. Well, i guess it's just you and me! Here's mine: Name: Sanuya Rank; beta female Personality: Feisty and full of spunk. Most ...

Tallulah Blood Mountain The wolves shook their heads, not having any idea. Worridly, Tallulah scanned the clearing for any sign of the low-ranking wolf. The over-hanging rocks of the camp ...

Tallulah Blood Mountain The moon shone brightly overhead, and the stars twinkled. Tallulah gave a short bark-howl, signaling the wolves in their dens or conversing quitely in the shadows to ...

Naira sniffed jealously as her sister caught the rabbit and began to trot proudly back to the pack. Humph. She scented the breeze for signs of prey, and thought she ...

oh.... Maybe make that clearer? I was under the impression that it really WAS a insect... Now I see it was a laser pointer. Also, about the suddeness, it still ...

Crashing through the trees, Sanuya headed for home, her fleet legs pushing her past her comrades. Prey scents found their way into her nose, but she forced herself to ignore ...

Ok, Here is my review.... Some awkward description..... And here are a few line edits: encountered in my entire career. Career? hehe... Elaborate... At the moment that it should be ...

urggh.... i reviewed this already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It must not have taken my post... Sorry about that.. I'll redo it later. :D

Naira Mystic Pup "Hah! I found you. Where are you going?" "Shhh, keep quiet. And get off me!" Naira jumped off her sister and looked at her curiously, ears cocked. ...

Tallulah Blood Mountain She raised her head and began to howl a reply, long and cold into the sky. She realized that the alphas of Oak Forest would hear her, ...

Sanuya padded silently through the trees, her well-fed stomach bulging slightly. Her kits followed her, rolling around on the springly turf that had sprung up between the tallest oaks. Scenting ...

Sniffing the air again, Sanuya examined the strangers. "My warriors will show you the way back to the border. Please pay more attention to the scent markers in the future. ...