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Naira Mystic Pup Naira bounced in her mother's jaws, trying not to complain too much about her displeasure at being handled in such a disgraceful way. "I can walk!" "No, ...

Selena glanced around hurriedly, taking in the chaotic scene around her. Guards ran back and forth, calling for non-existent reinforcements. So many precautions had been taken to avoid this kind ...

Excuse me!!!!! You were supposed to tell me about stuff you posted, remember? :( Anyway, I don't have time for an in-depth critique right now, but I'll get to it ...

Name: Selena Gender: Female Age: 21 Race: Mostly human Ability: shape-shifting. Mostly she turns into different kinds of animals, but she can also alter her appearance. Appearance: Always changing. Th

Nashoba Mystic Alpha M "It would be better not to risk any of the pack's lives. We'll have to go somewhere to the east of here, where there is some ...

yay! Thanks.... I definitely see what you mean. :D I might post some of my other drawings soon as well, I have been working on a couple. To everyone else ...

Tallulah Blood Mountain The wolves stalked restlessly through the night, loping quickly through the undegrowth. The full moon was almost all the way up, shining some ligt down on the ...

Wow, thanks for the review! I just got back from vacation.... I'll definitely take all the things you said into consideration..... Thanks again, and Happy New Year!!!!!!!!

Nashoba Mystic alpha Standing next to the alpha female, Nashoba bared his teeth, hackles and tail raised in agression and dominance. He did his best to look fierce, but her ...

Hmm, I am kind of mystified by this... What is supposed to be happening? I can see some very refreshing descriptions coming through, but it needs more clarity.... The other ...

This is really good! I love your idea. I definitely want to see chapter two.. Some things you might want to change: The part with the hawks is a bit ...

Wow... This is very wordy. Maybe break it up into two posts? The font was rather frusterating for me too, it made it hard to read. (It also made vertical ...

Naira Mystics She could hear loud noises coming from the direction of the other wolves, and guessed that they ahd scented the intruders. The were almost directly downwind of her ...