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Try scanning your drawings instead of taking pictures of them, if you can. It works a lot better and gives us a clearer image. What we hae now isn't very ...

I'd really like to improve this piece, since I like my idea. Any suggestions or comments regarding plot, typos or anything else would be greatly appreciated. Thanks! (Oh, and The ...

Thanks all! Your reviews are very helpful. Author13: thanks you for taking the time to review this, it was greatly appreciated. As I mentioned before I'm very anxious to improve ...

Wow..... fascinating idea. Its a bit short though..... Here is my critique: He was born to protect the eggs, he was chosen to hatch the eggs, he is Quiry. Quiry ...

The coin Part 1 of 2. A brisk wind was blowing, whipping the trees into a frenzy of waving branches which cast deepening shadows on the road. Two horses trotted ...

Hi! This was interesting...... It culd use a bit of work though. I think all the errors I noticed have already been pointed out, but I had a few things ...

Ask a mod to move it plz..... This isn't a story-book. Its ok though, anyone can make a mistake like that..... :)

Naira Mystic The wolf cringed in front of the alpha female, but still didn't answer. The other wolves clustered around it. Suddenly one of the golgot wolves spoke up. "I ...

ok..... Name: Tobi Gender: Male Pack: Blood Mountain Rank: None Age: 1 and a half yrs. Description: High-energy. Sometimes impatient, also predjudiced against other wolves. Attitude:Exuberant yet tame

Nashoba Mystic alpha m The two wolves son over-powered the other wolf. It lay on the ground with its tail tucked as more Mystic and Golgot wolves appeared. Cashmere waisted ...

Wow! Very nice piece. Some minor technical mistakes, which I will be pointing out, and also some minor repetition that you might want to fix. Here is my critique: Elephants, ...

Ok......... How much longer do we wait?

Naira Naira took in the situation as fast as she could. What had happened? She could smell that the huge wolf did not mean well, and it snarled at her ...

Really? My inspiration exactly for that picture! (not your rabbit of course :wink:)