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Cool! I don't think I've seen this before..... Do you like fencing? I like most of the same sports you do. Do you run competitively or do you just like ...

Ummm..... wouldn't do that. It would be pointless!! If no one posts it doest matter rime. :) Id leave it open for a while longer, ok? I'll post if I ...

Very nice! This flowed very smoothly, and you had excellent character and scene description. I like!!!!! The one comment I had was that there are quite a few places where ...

Tallulah Blood Mountain Tallulah raised her nose in one log howl, splitting the night air with it's sound. They werer almost to the meeting spot, and she could smell faint ...

> Nashoba Mystic Alpha "I... I think I've seen him before." Mansi stuttered a bit when all the eyes were on her, including those of the trapped wolf, but she ...

Ahhh..... I see. Now, reading through it again, There are a few spots. Im pretty sure its ok in some of them though....... I'll fix the ones I find. ;) ...

And.... Edited again! I am now going through my pieces one by one doing some extensive editing. I welcome commetns and suggestions from everyone!!!!!!!!! Part 2 is also now up, ...

Quote: As I helped the lady who was first in line to get her young children onto the deck, I was also scanning the waiting people for a sign of ...

Pleased to meet YOU!! (Again) :) Thanks you for the review, It was definitely helpful. I haven't actually decided where this is taking place, but it obviously is in the ...

:D Can't wait!

Thanks! Any suggestions for improvements? Im gonna keep the poll open for a while longer......

Thanks for the review! I will go and review your piece as soon as I have time. :D The caribou got away, because the pack was distracted as their leader ...

Wow! Thanks....... About the little old man part, he is one of the main characters. I think I am going to connect everything and have him be the reason most ...

Thanks for the review! It was very helpful. About the thirty chapters part, I said this was onely part one of two.... :) But I guess the same thing would ...