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Thanks! Gryphon: Thanks you for the review, it was very helpful. :) Azila: Thanks! I'll try to remember. I can’t understand them, but I don’t think there is anything wrong ...

Aparrrently so. *sigh* I am going through and hopefully fixing more tense changes now. I guess I'm just not really used to writing in present, and it doesn't really come ...

Well.... I wrote this a while ago and haven't done much editing. there are probably huge problems with tense and plot, and if you want to poin them out to ...

Nashoba Mystics Torn, Nashoba twisted around and barked sharply. Cashmere was still holding onto the river's edge, pedaling franticly in the water. Suddenly she yelped with pain, and the mountainlion ...

Very, very nice!!!!!!!! Wonderful feeling. Simple, but clear. The line-by line stuff has already been taken care of, but The one thing I wanted to say was that it is ...

Thanks. :) What you've said is very helpful, and I'll get around to editing it as soon as possible. :)

Yes.... It does. :) I don't know how this keeps happening. :) Thanks!

Thanks Camille! I have edited most of the things you mentioned. Whether it's missing something or not, I still like this. With your permission, I'd like to print out the ...

This one is a little shorter than the last. Please note that it is not necessary to read the first two before this, but I would apprecite it. :) So: ...

Thank you! Any suggestions on how to make that one part a bit slower and easy to understand? I welcome any comments/and/or suggestions! Thank you for the review.

Naira Mystic Pup Naira heard the howls along with the other wolves. They all charged off in the direction of the alphas, but for some reason naira wanted to stay ...

Hi! Thanks for critiquing some of my work by the way. :) Soo...... Questions. :) Where would you most like to travel? hehe..... What are your hobbies/favorite things to do? ...

Wow! Cool. I joined the swim team when it started, but they did't have enough kids to continue. I sprint too!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate hurdles though. :) When I couldn't do ...