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canislupis

  • Writing Tips Re: Tired of Procrastination?

    Heh, that's called "research"...... (Ironically, I read this whilst I'm trying to write. XD)

    Feb 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Murder

    Watching as if through a glass. Incomplete sentence here. You can get away with them sometimes, but it feels awkward for a first sentence. Who is watching? I smile and ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Old

    Hey Skins! I can't believe I'm first again! I only have about ten minutes before they turn the internet off, so I'll make this quick. Charlie did seem a little ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Tale of a Mill Kitten ~Part 1

    Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. This subject in general bothers me (and a lot of people) and I think it´s great that you want to write about it. ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Writing Tutorials Re: Major Revision in Novels

    In the past, every time I finished a “novel”(quotes intentional), I seemed to be left with a giant mass of completely unusable material. Which would have been ok if the ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)

    Yes! First! Anyway, after reading up to this point, I'm still engrossed in the story, which is good, and I love your character, which is even better. I feel like ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • OOC Archive Re: Hunger Games 3

    Hey guys-- I won't have time to keep up with this anymore, so I'm backing out. It's ok if you want to kill my character (Claire from district 2--she's extremely ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Not very new. But..

    Well, then, welcome back! I can't believe this isn't your first language--really, I would never have guessed. Anyway, hope you stick around! I know that for me, personally, this site ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Over The Years

    Wow... I feel old now. Nothing compared to you 05ers, though. I didn't even really remember what it looked like until I saw the shots.

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Archive Re: Hunger Games 3 - closed - started

    Claire "How's your throat?" I ask, glancing over my shoulder. "What?" But I don't dare yell louder. A strong wind has picked up, whipping my hair around and sending branches ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Many Opinions Needed!!!!!

    Well, it seems like you're still looking for something human-like (or at least something with human-like behavoral patterns) so I'd actually vote no to the wolves and cats--they exist on ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Other News Re: Hubble telescope zeroes in on green blob in space

    Woah... that's cool. The guy that invented the Hubbel telescope was a relative of mine.

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Archive Re: Hunger Games 3 - closed - started

    Claire Well, it was finally dark. I almost wanted the dusk back. We stumbled through the bushes and trees--we were still in a kind of forest--stumbling over our own feet. ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • OOC Archive Re: Hunger Games 3

    Ooh, dark would be cool! But I think the winter one would be better outside disneyworld. It's florida, for heaven's sake. It isn't cold. And it wouldn't have to be ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Archive Re: Hunger Games 3 - closed - started

    Yay! I killed someone, finally. Also, putting mud in a stomach wound would probably kill him faster. Just saying. Claire The knife was as good as lost, but if it ...

    Jan 9, 2011


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)