canislupis

Hi again! You're really pretty. :) I wish I had your hari! *Envious* Anyway, do you have a tatoo on your neck or are you wearing a necklace? I can't ...

I liked it. I do think you did a very good job. :) My one peeve was the ending, which didn't seem to fit right. :) See ya around! ~Lupis

Gasp! It really is similar to my story. :) First of all, I have to say that I really enjoyed this. Nitpicks first. :) The candle in the window flickered. ...

Hi! I really like this version. Blizzard seems to have a bit more personality, and the Cliches have been toned down and made beleilveable. One negative thing I did notice ...

Thanks Azila! I'm entering it in the Pierce County contest, which I guess you wouldn't know about. Its sponsored by my library system, and there are cash prizes. :) Thanks ...

Thank you soo much! Summergirl: Thanks for the review. :) Did you know rabbits are actually from the order Lagomorpha, and not Rodentia? I just found that out. :) Ginger: ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! For all that this is one of your first posts, it feels very polished, like you know what you are doing. You really have some talent! ...

1.. Very nice, detailed drawing, but I don't like the way the wing is cut off and it's a bit off-centered. 2. My favorite! Maybe a little more background though? ...

Thanks Grace & kepe! We just finished setting up the bunny cages today... :) *Vows NEVER to get a non-preassembled cage again* My hands still have blisters from the pliers. ...

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fireweed: thank you for the enormously helpful reivew. I do agree about the cliched bits of his dialogue, But im not sure how to make him say it without ...

Its green? Really? oh well... Thanks for the review! I did do it in colored pencils. ;)

Hi! Sorry if I repeat stuff. I should have gotten to this sooner. ;) Prologue: Ehem... I dunno, this part was very pretty and poetic, but the fantasy stuff was ...

Hey! I was going through starring all of your work when I realized I haven't reviewed this yet! *Gasp* I really like the originality and style of this piece, but ...

I really enjoyed reading this book.... But everyone knows I love rabbits.. (next to wolves of course) So this might be a biased oppinion.

I didn't really like it. The plot seemed cliche to the extremes, the writing style was dull... It was just really really hard to get through.