canislupis

Thanks you two! Seems as though bunny 2 is winning again. :) See ya! ~Lupis

Naira Naira smelled the fresh squirrel excitedly. Her first hunt! The other wolf was still talking. "You'd think you two had never been on a hunt before! Honestly..." He grunted ...

Tallulah "Thanks Yea." The she-wolf nodded her head and turned away. Tallulah dug into the rabbit, distracted for a few minutes by the overwhelming scent of the food. The hunt ...

Thanks Azila! This was really helpful. :) I'm gonna go through it a do some more major editing, but I just wanted a few more reviews first. :) 2. Spacing. ...

Naira "But we've never gone hunting bef....." Naira broke off as Zern nipped her ear, whispering, "Of course not! but he doesn't know that... it'll be fun!" Naira growled slightly, ...

Naira Naira dropped down onto her fore-paws, play-growling. "I'm going.... to get.... you!" Zern bounced to the side, avoiding her swipe. Naira came again, this time managing to clip her ...

{Hey! I didn't know this had started again....I guess I'll be by myself in Blood mountain, along with Tobi.:(} Tallulah The gathering had not gone well. Tallulah shook out her ...

Naira "Get... Off.... me!" Naira grunted as she wrestled with her sister. Cashmere yipped at them to be quiet, and Naira flattened her ears obediently. the two ran out of ...

Hullo everyone. :) I know this has taken a very long time, since I have been working on editing the entire fourteen chapters. :shock: I am already almost finished with ...

Banned for having a weird face in your custom title. ;P

I don't have any nitpicks, (other than ones already pointed out) either. ;) Overall, this was much much better, although very different from the first one. In answer to your ...

Yes! I got the rabbit. Thank your for the review. See ya! ~Lupis

Wow, thanks everybody! I'll get to work on editing this as soon as possible. (Which might be difficult, since it is EXACTLY the right length now.. lol ) Thanks again! ...