canislupis

Nice drawing! Here are some things I noticed: The head in proportion to the body is a little small. Bears in general have really big, jowly-looking heads. The head also ...

Hiya! As soon as I saw the word 'wolf' I had to read it. :roll: Anyway, this does feel a bit short, even for an intro. (Incidentally, is there more ...

Thanks! Any comments on things I could improve?

HI Azila! Sorry this took sooooooo long. Also, I’m sorry if I repeat things, since I haven’t been reading the comments, if there are any. I kick my feet in ...

Thanks for the review! By the way, I have just finished the rest of this story. I decided to turn the main character into an elderly widow, instead of my ...

He did not know did not=didn’t I think it would flow better, anyway. The Blue Fire would not let him Would not let him what? Stop? Maybe clarify this a ...

Thanks! I'll try an edit for the repetative stuff, as well as the typoes. ;) I did want her to be vain, and hopefully that will become more apparent in ...

It's been a while since I've been on, but I've been reviewing again now, and decided to post this. It is a continuation of Seal's story. I realize that it ...

And about the storey/story thing: I'm pretty sure it can be spelled either way -- maybe I should change it anyway? Yeah.... Like I said, I think it can be ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this, but we’ll get to that later… Nitpicks first, I suppose. ;) He shivered; he had turned the A.C. unreasonably high to try and manage ...

HI! First off, I have to say I really enjoyed reading this. As has been said, excellent imagery, though the spell check and grammar stuff could be improved. Here are ...

Sorry.... And.... Banned for sulking! (Just had to do that) =P

Banned for going off topic.....

Oh, Canis, I'm confused as to why there are two quotes at the bottom, was that a mistake or something? Ehem, :oops: Um.... Yes, that was a mistake. :( I ...

Hi! I don't have time for a full critique,:roll: but I'd like to point out a few things: 1. Spacing... I found myself distracted by the spacing problems, which is ...