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Re: The Balcony
Thanks! I was wondeirng if anyone would notice that. I will!
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Snow Spirit
Thanks! The first part of this was actually an old piece, I hust decided to finish it for the contest, and then realized that it was waaaay to long. I ...
Sep 17, 2008 -
Re: Bunnies!
Thanks! Sorry you couldn't see the second one, not sure what happened there... It might be a bigger file than the first. I think I'm gonna re-draw these and make ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Snow Spirit
Hi guys! Thanks for the reviews! Boon: Thanks! If you have anything for me to review, tell me!!!!! Conrad: I see what you mean. The original story was almost three ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Alphess: part one [revised as of 2008/03/11]
Ooh.... One more thing I noticed: Even though this is fantasy, I think it would be good if you incorporated more of the natural wolf behavior/hierarchy type stuff. I know ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: The Balcony
Thanks guys! I'll think about the stuff you said. Thanks for the reviews! Oh, and interesting idea aout the fore-shadowing. I might have to try that. ;) See ya around! ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Ours
Hi there! Only just heard about this yesterday, we just got back. (Email me!) I really enjoyed reading this! Here are some things I noticed: The air is cool here ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: The Balcony
Hi Azila! Thank you, that was really helpful. I think I'll fix some of the stuff right away, so I can't get out of it later. :) About the 'I ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: The Balcony
First draft (kinda) Need all the help I can get! Heh. Thanks! The Balcony The wind whipped through my hair as I pressed my face against the cold metal of ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Oooh... Prophecy of the Stones, by something or other Bujour. Part of this may be because it was poorly translated from French to English, but it was * shudders * ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Writer's Temperament
I guess I do share some of those traits, such as being able to sit still for a really long time, and liking to be by myself a lot. I ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Broken Wings, Blooded Swords
Hey! [He coughed up blood, more and more coming more frequently. How could he do this? He felt like he was betraying everyone who trusted him, who followed him by ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Snow Spirit
A extensive revision of an old piece. ~~~~~~~~~~ Snow Spirit All is silent. Snowflakes fall to the forest floor, settling gently onto beds of moss. The solid black sky above ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
I really don't see why these books were such a hit. Honestly! There are sooooo many books that are better than this series, and yet the author is a billionaire. ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Watercolor Sketches
Hi there! 1: Beautiful shading, the trees and background were magnificent, and they really set the mood. The house for me was so-so, since the way the eaves came to ...
Jul 21, 2008
