canislupis

Hi there! Here it goes: Veni Vidi Vici I came, I saw, I conquered Eh… I know this has been said already, but get rid of the translation. It’s distracting ...

Whaha! What happened? Your text has disappeared! And I wanted to review it! PM me if you get it back up. ~Lupis

Hey there! It's your turn to rip MY story apart! Please? :) Title: The Balcony Genre: Other fiction (Hope that's ok, it wasn't mentioned) Link:

And..... Done!

Hi! Here is your promised review. :) I really liked reading this piece, and I found it touching and pretty original. However, in my second read-through I found a few ...

Thanks for the review! I'll try and fix the things you mentioned. About that one chunk of conversation, I know it's confusing, and I'm having trouble trying to make it ...

I'll get to it as soon as I can! ~Lupis

Welcome to Critiques by Canislupis! Doesn't that sound like the name of an over-priced clothing store? Anyway. Unsure? Look at my shiny reviewer badges! . . . . . . ...

Hi! Here's the link: It's in other fiction. Thanks! ~Lupis

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this one as well, and can't wait for the next one. One question: Why is it in a quote box? I found that distracting. Also, ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this one as well, and can't wait for the next one. One question: Why is it in a quote box? I found that distracting. Also, ...

I usually start with an idea, and then after I'm a chapter or so in to the story I'll go back and outline what I've already done, and then the ...

Hi Wolf! Haven't seen you in a while... :) Anyway, add me to the list! I'm interested in seeing where this is going. 1:Hmm... Obviously she's having trouble in school, ...

Hi there! I just have to say I really enjoyed reading this. It was excellently constructed, flowed well (for the most part), was free of mechanical errors, (though I may ...

Hi there! I like your story, but there are quite a few errors throughout, in plot and mechanics. I’m going to go through the first paragraph: The panther paced his ...