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canislupis

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Box

    All comments appreciated! :D The Box The stairs creak, complaining loudly as I step up the narrow staircase. I reach a hand out to try the door at the top, ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    Hey! I'm back now, so I can critique new pieces.

    Mar 3, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Orli and Eden (1)

    Hi there! I'm not sure why you took this down... Just because you have to bring it in to school doesn't mean it can't still be up here for everyone ...

    Feb 7, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Using Create Space?

    You add your files by clicking "upload interior files" or something like that. If you upload from Word it will do all the formatting for you, and convert it to ...

    Jan 20, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: runaway revisited - an exert.

    Hey! Here is your promised review. I really liked this! Nice job. :) It feels like it has been edited, even though I think you said it was a first ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    Ok! Wolf, yours should be up shortly, and I have Lost_In_Dreamland's piece waiting for me to type up. Happy New Year! ~lupis

    Jan 6, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Orli and Eden

    Hey there! I will get to reviewing this as soon as possible. By the way, I am trying to cut and paste this into Word so I can print it ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    Hey Camille! I'll get to it as soon as I can. Until then! ~Lupis [EDIT]Everyone interested in a review: I will be mostly unavailable through Dec 25, and the day ...

    Dec 24, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: wolf hunt

    but I do know that who ever gets the kill willl get most of the meats, but usually its a free-for -alll(unless the alpha wolf says so) all in alll ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Chicken

    Hi! I enjoyed reading this. :) Your writing style is really cool, and I actually think there was about the right amount of description, contrary to other reviewers. The biggest ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    ooh... Sorry I couldn't complete those. Like I said, I'd prefer things that are under PG-13, since, after all, I'm only thirteen. :)

    Dec 20, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Eight periods in the life

    Hey there! I'm really sorry, but reading this, it almost looks like it's bordering between PG-13 and R, and I'm only 13. I know I promised a review, but I ...

    Dec 20, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    K! I'll get to it as soon as possible! ~Lupis

    Dec 20, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Piano Forte

    Hey there! I love historical fiction, especially Tudory-type stuff. ;) Well, here goes. I stumbled into a dark, mysterious room. It was chilly, as if some one had left all ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

    Done! Thanks for posting. ~Lupis

    Dec 19, 2008


We are not to simply bandage the wounds of victims beneath the wheels of injustice, we are to drive a spoke into the wheel itself.
— Dietrich Bonhoeffer