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Hey! Thanks for the helpful reviews. :) I appreciate it. I dunno if I mentioned this before, but this was kinda a spur-of-the-moment piece, so I probably do have to ...

I agree--the paws are great. But still, the hindquarters and legs look to short to me, especially the back one. If you look at a picture, you'll see that their ...

Hi there! Good job on the picture. I have one or two suggestions: I like the paws, (no, I'm not going to say they look like hooves) but I think ...

Thanks for the reviews. About the first paragraph, I'll try to edit it. Any suggestions? Emm: Thanks! I'll try to add some character development. I had a feeeling this was ...

Hi there! I liked this piece--enough conflict so it wasn't boring, and also the potential for emotional impact. I'm having a hard time putting to words my biggest problem was, ...

The first time I got eleven... then for fun I went through and checked all the boxes. This is what I got: She isn't a character: she's you, or you ...

Why is 'writing' not an answer? Or "all of the above"? I said swimming, but I like camping and reading as well--will probably do some of each. :)

Hi! I was just looking through your portfolio, seeing if there was anything you neglected to tell me about, and there! Aha! Nice try. :P (I am very bored right ...

Hi! First, I have a question: Are you meaning this to be set in actual mideval history? If so, then this is Hist. fiction. If not, then maybe you should ...

Interesting.... I normally don't like fanfic much but I enjoyed reading this all the same. My one complaint was the part at the very end... why did Harry attack Ron? ...

Hey there! It looks like several people have suggested spacing this out more. I think I agree, but I think maybe it might be even better if you start with ...

Hi! You nailed it... This was hysterical. I love how Jacob is sulking in the corner. You really got everything without seeming overdone. I can't wait to read the other ...

Thank you for the review! I will edit with your suggestions.

[edit]This has gotten quite a few reviews, so sorry if I repeated anything. Also, has this changed recently? I cut and pasted it into Word, and have a different version. ...

Sure! You should see the first one up soon. :)