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  • Media Reviews Re: Pride and Prejudice VS Little Women

    Exactly--Pride and Prejudice for the win. :) Not to dis Little Women or anything though, because I loved that story two, but it just didn't have the depth that pride ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: That's So Edward

    Wow, that was---slightly disturbing. Still, very funny. I cracked up. Besides, it's not even that far fetched... Sigh. Anyway, just one or two things: “Shut up, shut up, shut up! ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Another Manga

    This is very good. I have to say, I'm not really a fan of manga but I still like these drawings. Of course, my neck is a little sore from ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: German Shepherd pup

    Maybe it's because of the angle of the head, but for some reason it's chin looks a bit squished to me. The cheeks also look a bit lopsided. At the ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Snow

    Wow, these are really pretty. I want to go there! Anyway, the one thing I would watch out for is having to cluttered a background--it makes looking at the picture ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Babysitter

    Thanks everybody! I really appreciate the feedback. Myfriendsavamp: This is just a short story, so I won't be continuing, but I'll still probably get rid of fluff. As I was ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Wacky Sentences!

    I licked a stuffed animal riding a motorcycle because I'm a NINJA!

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: A random fact about yourself

    Let's see... I have a bizarre, completely irrational fear of Home Depot(a home/hardware supply store, for those of you who don't have them)oh, and I used to have hair long ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Babysitter

    Hey everyone! It's been a while since I've written anything, so I think this is probably not a shining example of my work. That said, I would appreciate any comments ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Blank eye

    Hey there! This is great--every time I read one of your works, they seem to be better and better. Here are a few suggestions: 1. just a quick tip: instead ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Research Archives Re: Publishers and agent research?

    About Writer's Market--It's a book, published annually, with tons of listings. Helpful, but fairly expensive. There's also the online writer's market--you have to pay a fee to have access to ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Monster - part 1

    I see what you mean. In fact, I agree--keeping the main character's name hidden makes it feel like it could be anyone. The detached nature is good as well, as ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Monster - part 1

    Hey there! I like this. Luckily, gruesomeness doesn't really bother me. ;) While most of the things I found have been pointed out already, (thanks, Mr. Knightley) I did notice ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook

    Wow... Even though I've been a member for a few years now, I still see my writing imrpove by leaps and bounds. Just comparing the stuff I do now to ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Thanks Snoink (more review stars)

    So when Snoink gets to the limit again, for the next set of starts, I vote that you should need more than 100 reviews to level up. 200-500 would be ...

    Jan 8, 2010


Every first draft is perfect, because all a first draft has to do is exist.
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