canislupis

Oh wow, I really loved this. The description and such was just wonderful. Because Antigone's already gone over the nitpicky type stuff, I think I'll just talk about the first ...

I liked this--especially the way you clearly took the time to proof read before posting. Here are some things I noticed that you may want to look for: 1. Character ...

Hmm.. I would have said Depp, but that picture is just so.... eh. And I like Knightley, so yeah. What exactly is this trying to prove?

Heh... Read the comments underneath! They're hilarious! Hah! You're right. But seriously, who's suprised? If I had a series as wildly powerful as Twilight, I'd be trying to capitalize on ...

Hey! I loooovvvveee this (sorry for all the extra letters. That's just how much I love it. XD) I'd probably second Snoink and say to change the title, but that's ...

Thanks so much! Ok, so I guess I'll have to edit some of the description in the beginning. I'm not really sure what else could happen, but I'll think about ...

This is seriously disturbing. :) Which is good! Oh, and welcome to YWS! You're already featured! Wow, that's really impressive. :) Now, on to the review. I noticed a couple ...

I'm not sure where you got this idea, almost all the books that I've read that have mind readers are girls. Not only in books but in comics, movies etc. ...

acting in it’s own rebellious way Typo: It's=it is. Should be 'its' I took a deep breath in, the salty smell of the ocean filling my senses. I tripped a ...

Hi! Thanks so much for the review. I'll try and edit for the things you mentioned. About the street/hall thing: This is based off the Pike Place Market in Seattle. ...

Or an engineer/rep for an overseas company? I have friends who could have taken 6 month or year long assignments in Japan.

Me! Here's my general-fiction short story: quarter#p695936 Thanks! Lupis

Hey there! I'd appreciate a review of my short story: quarter#p695936 Thanks a bunch! Lupis

Flash fiction written for a contest. All comments appreciated. :) _____________________ The Quarter The late afternoon breeze is chilly with the coming winter. He feels the cold deep in his ...

Thanks for this--especially the its vs. it's thing. I'll be linking people here in the future. :) Lupis P.S. Could you add something on you're vs. your, perhaps? That's the ...