canislupis

Hi again! I think I like this one even better than the other one! I especially love the ending. :) Lol, I don't have anything at all to say! I ...

Hi there! :) I really don't know how to critique the technical side of poetry at all since I don't write it. :( But, that said, I do have three ...

Hi there, and welcome to YWS! I hope you love it as much as I do. I'm lupis, or canis, or Canislupis, doesn't matter. :) So, what kind of stuff ...

Ok, first of all, I’m a homeschooler too! You should check out our user group. ;) Here is your requested review. I’ll get to my overall thoughts later. For now ...

Your vs. You're happens to be both my pet peeve and one of the most common grammatical mistakes on YWS. Every time I see something like "That was great! Your ...

Silversharpie--Done! Hope I helped. :) Laura--Read it, but not had time to post the review yet. You should see it soon, though. Attolia--Sorry this is taking so long. XD The ...

Hi there! And welcome to YWS! I hope you like it as much as I do. So far, my experience has been great and I've learned more about writing here ...

Done, classy! I really liked your story. Anyone else?

Hi! I’m actually the first! :o Anyhow, on to the review as requested. Line-by-line first: When I awoke, the sun was just rising over the tall mountains. I quickly rose, ...

Hey Rascalover! Yours in done. Hope I helped at least a little. :) Come on, people, I need more!

Hi! Like Lava said, I don't think I'll be reading the previous chapters, so I'll just go from what's in this one. Line-by-line first. :) He kissed her forehead. God ...

I'm depressed because I can't seem to download this, and I really want to read it! There's no way you could post the actual text, is there? Because I really ...

I was totally going to point out what EliteHusky said. Oh well. So, yeah, I agree with him about the emotion flowing out of this. I love it! I also ...

I partly agree with Snoink, but I still liked it. The only thing I have to add is that I would've liked it a lot if she had refused and ...

Attolia, most of yours are done as well. I'm more than halfway to my goal of one hundred reviews before June 20! Anyone else?