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Woah, Mizzle has a sister! Anyhow, welcome! I'm sure you'll love it here. ;) Let me know if you ever need a review or anything, though Mizzle can probably help ...

Run-on sentences are without a doubt one of the most common grammatical errors here on YWS, and no wonder, for not many people even know what they are or how ...

Done! Thanks for asking me--I loved your story. I am now only two reviews away from my goal! Anyone else?

The night was cool and balmy, a nice welcome from today's unusual heat. A nice welcome? What? Awkward sentence here, I think. This was not what the doctor ordered, You ...

*Bumpity bump bump bump* I know, I'm shameless. But come on people! I'm only three reviews away from another star! I could do that today!

“You are far from your land and vassals. You hold no power here. Besides which, I too am myself a prince.” Either too or am should be cut. “Very well. ...

Grammar first: They had Christians service on a rainy afternoon. He was forty one when he died, I am sixty three, and a woman of my age should never have ...

Hi! I really like the changes you've made. It's much stronger now. :) Since you asked, here is one article I found on character development: 5 Tips And another on ...

First, I'd like to commend you on your bravery. :) But also, how fast can you type? I'm a pretty fast typer (around 100 WPM, usually) but it still took ...

Hi there! Here is your review, as requested. So, I'll confess that I didn't like this one as much as the one before it. I think this is because a) ...

Hi again! Sorry this took so long. I will now begind the daunting task of trying to find something no one else has talked about. ;) It was a gusty, ...

*gasps* I want one!

First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you love it as much as I do. Ok: At the moment I don't have time for a full critique, so I'll ...

And... Done! I am now only nine reviews away from my goal!

Hope you had fun traveling. ;) It's too late for me to come up with any advice now, since you already left, but please let me know if you have ...