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Re: Skinsy Needs Your Brain. Now.
First of all, EEEE! I've been in Ecuador and Peru for the past three months! I'm sure you'll love it. About the roughing it part, it may take some getting ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Away
Hi! First I have to apologize about how long this has taken—I promised to review all the contest pieces and saved yours for last, since I liked thinking about it. ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: The Earth Mother
Hi! This is lovely. Her expression and everything--very elegant. My only complaint(s) would be that, like others have said, you should really downsize this--there are a few articles about this ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Solstice
lk, hai! this is totally amazing and I understood everything. wat was it about? Anyway, I am going to review this. I had a few line-by-line comments, so like the ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: British Stereotypes
Wait... there's a Tennessee accent? And compared to you Brits and considering the size of our country, I think you people have too many. :D Seriously--there are only.... five American ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Dance
Hi! First of all, sorry this took so long--internet connection (and computer access!) is a bit hard to come by here. Anyway, Azila has already said much of what I ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part One
Hi! Thanks for requesting a review. Sorry this took a while, by the way. I was off exploring the islands of lake titicaca. Anyway, I think Carbon already pointed out ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Colors
Hello! Here to review, same as Azila. Congrats, BTW. I really love this piece. First, I'll admit I was just as confused as everyone else when I read it: No, ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but you get so obsessed with your appearance that you spend all your time getting plastic surgery. I wish I could talk to animals.
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: People who annoy me.
THANK YOU Demeter. I thought I was the only one. Hmm... People who butt cigarettes out car windows. And Sarah Palin, but that kinda goes without saying.
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: The Concept of Infanity
And... Part 2! Sorry about this, but I can't figure out why it isn't working. Mods, if you feel like it, feel free to merge. 2. Plot. Don't get me ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: The Concept of Infanity
[Edit] Grr... Half my review got cut off. It keeps happening no matter how many times I try to post it, so I'm going to try posting only a section. ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: British Stereotypes
Wait... there's a Tennessee accent? And compared to you Brits and considering the size of our country, I think you people have too many. :D Seriously--there are only.... five American ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Tips of writing teen mystery?
Well, I can't say I have much experience with mystery, but from reading it, it seems like the hardest thing would be keeping things hidden. Other genres have complicated plots ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Saving Aleogra -- Need reviews on the idea.
They talk until a guard comes in and asks about a human. He leaves after Ivy declines but not before Ivy notices a pair of eyes disappear from her window. ...
Mar 6, 2011
