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Hi there! So, I like this. It's short, too the point, there's no backstory, and it leaves me wanting to read more. Superhero stories aren't exactly the rarest of things, ...

Hi there! I haven't read the first bit, but I'll do my best with this. She reached up and pulled the elastic out of her hair, letting it tumble down ...

Hi there! I haven't read the previous chapter, but I'll give this a try based on what's here. The Seven Tribes Of The First War Before the time of the ...

I got up at six-thirty still feeling tired. Today was just the first day of sophomore year. The sun was shining into my room which made me feel a bit ...

Hi! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you love the site as much as I do. It's great that you're already posting and getting the hang of the ...

Hi there! I see you're sortof new, so welcome! I'm glad to see you posting already. Anyway, I like this prompt--there are so many things that could happen! And you ...

I actually wrote this review this morning, but then my computer crashed! But let me get to the review for a second time. :D Some of it might not apply ...

Hello! I like this--it's short, and punchy, and the writing's good. Just a few things. You mentioned tenses. Second person is hard to pull off well, especially in past tense--so ...

Seriously Bolt.... how many pages do you need? :P *gets out of life*

Hi! I don't think I've reviewed anything of yours recently. Anyway, here goes! I like this piece--your writing is pretty good, and I liked the cute relationship. The biggest problem? ...

Hi! I like this. A few nitpicks, first. He shut his eyes tightly as he looked down at the grass that covered his front garden. His heart slid up his ...

Hello! This'll have to be quick, my internet time is running out. Anywho. Point number one: we have known eachother TOO LONG. Our brains have melded. I'm saying this because ...

I love this. It has a certain dream-like quality that I just... well, love. It's faded, like childhood memories, but still vivid, which is one of the reasons I liked ...

The thud of hoof beats was loud around them, as they charged down the cut path that lead down the hill to the deeper valley below. I'm pointing this out ...

Hey Skins! First of all, from skimming the reviews I can see you've already changed this quite a bit and from what I can see it's a lt better--but I ...