cammie4

Thanks so much again, guys! Your critiques are really helping a lot. I should be posting the next chapter very soon.

Thanks bunches for your critiquing, guys! It's really helping. Also, about the "said" thing: I've heard both sides, that "said" is better than other words and that other words are ...

This. Is. Amazing. I love the tone. And I felt almost sick reading about what happens to the children. Love the last bit. Saint Razorblade pretty much covered all the ...

First off, thanks for the comments, they're really helpful. I didn't realize I don't have that much description. Secondly, thanks for letting me know it sounds cliche at the beginning. ...