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OK, well I fixed it now.

Um, I was kind of being sarcastic about that.... maybe it wasn't obvious....

So it's summer, which for me means "WRITING WRITING WRITING." I started the month with a story that randomly popped into my head, and I love it, but whenever I ...

So I wasn't going to post this, but I decided I wanted some feedback. This is the preface of my story, which is more of a romance than science fiction, ...

Wow, thanks, everybody! Haha, I heart all the Frenchness. J'aime beaucoup le français!

This. Is. Amazing. I love the tone. And I felt almost sick reading about what happens to the children. Love the last bit. Saint Razorblade pretty much covered all the ...

First off, thanks for the comments, they're really helpful. I didn't realize I don't have that much description. Secondly, thanks for letting me know it sounds cliche at the beginning. ...

So this was pretty interesting. I love reading about gypsies, but there are not enough stories about them! Anyway, there are a few little things that might need some tweaking... ...

I've been working on this for just over a month, and the only people who have read it are my two friends who are kind of biased. I want some ...

That was really, really sad! I love sad stories! (Don't ask why...) This was pretty well-written, although there were a few grammar mistakes and content... awkwardness (?). You mostly made ...

Thanks for the welcome! I'm part French in that I have French heritage and also speak it... a little. My Great-Grandmother speaks it, so I thought I might as well ...

Okay, so I'm not French. Well, I am part French... but that's not important. I love to write. I've been writing ever since I learned how to form words. I ...

Okay, so first of all, I LOVE the way you write. Your metaphors and similes are amazing. My favorites: Pain surged through my body like an angry bolt of lightning. ...