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I think it's good when you scare yourself. I mean, not good, but it just shows how vivid your imagination is. If your own story keeps you up at night, ...

Thanks, that was really helpful! I think I know what I'm going to do now.

Okay, so right now in my story, the main character, Vegas, has to be sworn to secrecy (the secret that some of her classmates are actually WMDs) but right now ...

Oh, you are so lucky things just come to you like that! I always feel like I'm forcing my stories. I've started to quit using outlines. Maybe that'll help.... Good ...

Nice. I like how you began with her writing a story in class. That is so me! However, this was very short, and we don't know much about these characters. ...

So this seems pretty interesting. I'm loving how you've established the characters here, although I am hoping for names soon. Since this is only the preface, and it's so short, ...

You're off to a good start, but his personality needs a bit of work. You have some words, and words are good, but way too broad. I mean, courageous could ...

This is excellent! When I read the first sentence, I thought it was in the present-day at a normal school, but as I kept reading, I found it was certainly ...

Hey, I'm up for it! The plot sounds really interesting, and it's been forever since I've gone over someone else's story.

lyrical_sunshine: Maybe we're both crazy! :P thunder_dude7: That's funny! Fortunately all my dreams with copyright issues would never make good stories (eg. my dream in which King Kong was attacking ...

Might I just first start out by saying I'm really liking the way this story is going. You have a reasonable combination of suspense, mystery, and romance (well judging from ...

Okay, because I am a grammar freak, that's the first thing I have to say. I noticed that you don't end dailogue with a comma when there is a dialogue ...

Wow, I really liked this! It was so sweet and funny, but also serious. I don't know what you call this, maybe a dramedy? The one-sided conversations were brilliant and ...

Ooooh, I love it! Very creepy indeed. And like what's up with that Richard guy? You write splendidly (excuse my use of old-fashioned language). I could totally feel the tension ...

This is amazing! I just love the way you write. Like I can totally picture the situations and the setting and feel what Belle is feeling. It's just great. You ...