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Re: Silent Screaming
The clicking of the clock ceases to start, As all time is frozen like solid water, The wind is still between each bare blowing, All that is moving, a silent ...
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Re: Tears
Cool! I like how you kept using the words "rain" and "tears". It created a feeling of sadness because the word choice was so limited. Sometimes when people are sad ...
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Re: The Fatal Wound
That's awesome! i love this poem... because i started to read it and then i was thinking of how scary and gloomy it was. gradually it got more bright and ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Thanks Shinobiinfinity! i'm new here (u can probably tell) and i can't figure out how to reveiw a specific person's work. i could reveiw some of yours... except, don't know ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: A Plastic Bag
I really liked your poem! I was so imaginative and i espicially loved how you didn't use cliche terms. The part about the velvet wind and the hands folding the ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Debated Importance of Cookies Versus Essays
Thx for reveiwing my story! i can't figure out how to reveiw others people's. Little help? :-)
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
If you like it, "like" it! :D Cruising on a river of air Searching for a tropical paradise He bobs along as if jamming to tunes Spots an cozy landing ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Debated Importance of Cookies Versus Essays
Where was I going with this? I stopped typing to bang my forehead on the keyboard, making it buzz angrily at me, “Error! Error!” “Hmmmm.” I mumbled. The computer ignored ...
Jun 13, 2011
