cammie

Ok, here is a great, great poem that is warm and fun and makes me smile. So, first of all I am going to have to say that I am ...

OK, great poem you got here. I just have to say a few things about it. First, don't cdenter it. Put it to the side like the copied one I ...

Hey. First of all, I really liked this. It was so precise and captured the agony you felt in every word. The words were well chosen to fit the topic ...

Oh wait, one more thing. The title doesn't really fit. I thought something happened to the other person or object, and you just got that benefit givin to you. Unless ...

First of all, sorry to say I had absolutly no idea what you were talking about. I'm probably just clueless but maybe you could put some more details for the ...

So sad! The rhyme was really good! So good that I didn't even notice it until halfway through! It flowed well. All I can say is... maybe add a line ...

So sad! The rhyme was really good! So good that I didn't even notice it until halfway through! It flowed well. All I can say is... maybe add a line ...

OK, first of all I apoligize if I put the wrong breaks in the lines on your poem. And, no, I don't thinkit was cheesy. It was nice, simple and ...

Snow blindfolded the ground, warning it not to peek. Spring was here, but the green landscape was still under construction, a curtain of whiteness hiding it. Navy paint poured itself ...

Hmm... I really like this concept. You had great descriptions and a wonderful idea behind the story. But, I have to say I was a little confused by the way ...

WOAH!!!!! That was truly amazing! I loved the conversation format and I thought it worked well. The two men each had a voice, one who repeated everything the other said ...

LOVE IT! hahahah this was funny. and a perfect fit for the contest.... it could be a winner :-)

This is awesome! Wow, there is some close competition.... :-)

Awesome! Wow, this is going to be among the top winners I can already tell!

Ohhhhhh! Is it true? The same thing happened to me in 4th grade! I thought it was really well-written and I loved the short, snappy, too-the-point lines. But, note about ...