cammie

Hi there. First of all I like this poem in a sad kind of way. That's a good thing, don't worry. :) It's touching and sweet, and makes you think ...

I watch the raindrops on the window Bursting into action when they hit the transparent surface Starting to curl their way down the pane Choosing the life they will lead ...

I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the sunrise. Don’t tell anybody. That ruins it. The grumpy moonlight clouds, Shove and growl, Away. To show the glittery sun. Glancing ...

He is the lonely stranger that travels everywhere. The parasite carried by greedy hosts. The simplicity of something so complex. He has a perfect home behind him, But he doesn’t ...

Stalk still, waiting on the street corner, I almost see him nod at me. Blinking. Unsure. Silence. Hush, hush. Hush, hush. A strange aura around us. Alien spaceships rocket to ...

Ok, so I thought I'd just try this style. It's called a tritina, so it sounds a little weird, but hopefully you'll like it. Alone I glide, breathtakingly magical Each ...

Wow this is awesome! I saw the title "Teddy Brear and His Used Heart" and thought, "what?", but it turned out to be really good! I can't beleive the style ...

Wow I love this SO SO SO SO much! It's the best poem I've read all day and I've read eleven poems today and reveiwed them all. So tired. But, ...

OMG. This is so sad. It can't be for real. Is it? Oh my gosh. Well, anyway to the reveiw. I thouht this poem was very moving and tragic. Sorry ...

OK, here's the deal. So, first of all I liked this poem. I was well written, with a rhyme that was hidden and added to the hyme, like flow of ...

Thanks tgirly! Hey, you live in South Dakota? Cool! Is that near Colorado? That's where I live. But right now I'm in Florida visiting my grandparents and going to the ...

OK, first I have to say you've got a really unique poem here. I'd made me sad and confused. The rhyme and rhythme was really good, but, sorry to say, ...

I simply love this poem! It totally changed my outlook on what the underw rold is like. I didn't completely understand it, but the parts that I did understand, I ...

This as awesome! I really liked your story.

HI! I really like your story. I don't have much to say except I really liked the concept and it was well-developed. Bye!