cammie

Wow. Nice poem. :) You really capture the sadness and depression with a bunch of great descriptions! I might suggest only having one space between each line instead of two ...

Hmmm.... Humiliation? Tragidy? Happiness turned to sadness? Well, that sure is a cheesy way to start off. But I'm just not quite sure what this is about. I understand how ...

Hey there. I liked this poem. It was deep, emotional, and captivating. Nice job. I like how you tell what the people are saying without writing, "they said". Instead you ...

OK, not what I expected. But nice. It flowed well and I liked the simple word choice and rhythme. The style is very relaxed and easy to read. It seemed ...

OK, hi Andie. Just FYI this is the reveiw you won from my contest. So, hopefully it's helpful. Um, well, I'm not sure I completely understand the topic of the ...

(This is one of the three reveiws you won from my contest, just FYI.) OK, so generally... WOW! You write some of the most amazinng poetry I've ever read. This ...

This was amazing. I loved the way you started out with the two of you together by the sea every day, then went into how the sea now seperates you ...

Hi there! Here is one of the three reveiws you asked for. So, first of all, I really liked it. I'm a little behind: atlanta is the lost undersea city, ...

Hi there! Here is, as promised, the reveiw of your entry to my contest. First of all, I'm twelve. So, yeah. But I do have to say I liked the ...

Hi there! Here is, as promised, the reveiw of your entry to my contest. I adore this poem. Just so you know, I spent a long time deciding between this ...

Hi there! Here is, as promised, the reveiw of your entry to my contest. I think your poem was a great start. Maybe you want to make it longer, or ...

Hi there! Here is, as promised the reveiw of you entry to my contest. So, first of all I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading it. The word choice ...

OK, great job on this. Way to go putting a history lesson into something interesting to read. :) But just because you are my friend doesn't mean I'm going to ...

Um, hey I could use some reveiws. Since you don't do poetry...boo hoo... then I guess you could give me some feedback on my short stories. Beware, I am a ...

Hi there. First of all I really liked this poem. I'm not much for the rhymers, but this one turned out pretty well. The flow was good. I'm not quite ...