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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: [​and the sea has eaten montreal by now]

    Well done! I love the imagery here. Your poem paints a vivid scene in the mind's eye. The girl is an interesting character, though there is a lot left unanswered ...

    Aug 15, 2025


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster