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  • Other Poetry Re: The Liar

    Dear World, Do you honestly think I don’t want to stop? If I had a choice, Do you truly believe, I would choose this? I can’t do anything At all, ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Thank You, My Dear

    Thank you, my dear, I appreciate it, my dear, Oh please, my dear, It is all lies. I am not another pretty face, And words still hurt me. There is ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shooting Stars

    This was really good! I applaud you! I cannot see the sun, for the sky has turned to black. That drew me in. I thought the imagery in the first ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Here I Am

    I loved the last line of it. The poem as a whole was very moving. However, I thought that breaking from "they" to "it" on the mouth part depleted from ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Mask

    I enjoyed the way it ended, asking if she is vain. It isn't often that people think that someone would hide themselves because they think they're too good. Mostly its ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Aimée (2)

    I enjoyed how she changed her name. It makes it intriguing. I want to know why she did that, which makes me want to read more. However, I agree with ...

    Sep 7, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Withstanding the Symphony

    Prologue Four Years Prior July 13, 2006 The cap was off. I was ready to make my way in the world. Thousands of opportunities were at my feet. Life was ...

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Red Dove

    There was a place, That I once knew. Now the walls are white, The sun is bright. But I miss that place, With walls of pink And temporary, artificial heat. ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Keep Her Smiling

    In December, two were taken And the whole school grieved. We cried, and said “Why did this happen?” But none knew the answer and we all moved on. On Good ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: House

    We named her Grandma And built her a house. The house on the hill, Unfinished. A skeleton. Forgotten by most. By her tribe. By her friends. But we remembered. And ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I loved, Not love

    They say sticks and stones can break my bones But words will never hurt me But Person I loved called me a bitch Person I loved called me Satan Person ...

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Isabel

    I love you. I have never met you, But I love you. You see, I do know you. Though they will say I don’t. I picture you. Often. Blonde hair. ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Sky

    Way up in the sky On a fluffy white cloud I watch the tiny people Smaller then ant people Roll on and on In their happy lives. My fluffy white ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Oh, the Pleasures of Math!

    Oh, the pleasures of math, How I love it so With numbers and figures To burn my brain cells. Oh, but how I do love My bothersome friend Who picks ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Grey Tears

    Ok. So here’s the deal. I was born during the Time of Old on the planet Earth, a country called Scotland. My name, my real name, no longer matters. The ...

    Feb 12, 2010


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— Tony Dorsett