callmeike

Hello DragonGirl :). I have something interesting that i think that you would enjoy reading. Right now there are only two parts but im working on the third right now. ...

I don't really know how this works honestly haha. I'm probably over thinking this, but whoever I have to review then just pm me and i'll do it :P. And ...

Hi there Ike here for a review! First of all i liked reading it. It made me laugh and sort of think of myself. I thought it to be a ...

“Ya got any last words John?” The Sheriff asked holding the barrel of a rifle in between his eyes. He was in the middle of nowhere, nothing but the mountains ...

The cold wind kissed her cheek while the snowflakes gently swayed back and forth with such grace and peacefulness it looked as though they were rocking themselves to sleep. But ...

That poem was great. I personally felt the emotion in it because I have a younger sister. I love how you kind of gave the brothers life there and how ...

I liked the imagery you put in my head with this poem. It was fantastically written. I almost felt as if i was the child getting told the story haha. ...

That was amazing. I loved the imagery you put in it and I especially like the way that you made the "Beast" talk to him. It gave me chills when ...

So much yes!! I am not really a poem kind of guy, but wow! This is really good. I love the imagery and the description you put into it. I ...

It was interesting. I really liked it because it felt raw. There is a few punctuation errors that I wont get into because I am pretty bad at that too ...

I loved this story. I enjoyed how fast paced it was but it was not hard to understand. It takes skill to do that, and you did it in such ...

I like it a lot! You gave very good description and i really enjoyed reading it. I only have a few things to say. I feel that you used the ...

Jenny's shrieks echoed in the empty room, along with the loud crack of the 9mm glock. My right side felt warm and moist as I held it. The interloper froze ...

I really like this piece because It really shows some raw emotion. But yes you do have punctuation errors but nothing time and practice will fix. :) please keep writing

I loved your description of the sea he was on and the imagery you used. The only thing I could possibly think of improving on would be punctuation, and you ...