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---> Uh, I don't quite completely get this but I am interested and I made my character.. BOY Name: Gavin Scuthz. Age:17 and five months. Animal: Hawk, with dark black ...

---> I love it Demoness, especially the very last line! That can encouragement to those who were feeling hopeless. :) Super!! - Cali34rniaSummer

------> whoa, this one's dark and really for scares! :] If you only knew how much I really, really love this. haha! Good job!

---> *clap-hands* ----> You got me in there! What more can I say! This poem's just soo good. ----> So, the narrator used to play Chess w/ her grandpa etc. ...

CHAPTER FOUR Afternoon "You can't blame him, the guy's handsome." Sandy smiled as she licked the ice cream in her ice cream cone. Naddie rolled her eyes as she licked ...

--> know what you make a good *creep-me* poem though I cannot exactly connect the title "I Blush" to the content of the poem.. I like how she felt envious ...

----> on both are too shy, switch [to] to [too] ;) ----> This poem is good if not only for those typographical oopsies such as the way you spelled "maybe". ...

---> ohh gee, switch the title Art Dump to Cool Art, be optimistic there, you've got talent :)

Smyling ---> thanks for the feedback! And can you please, point out my grammar/punctuation mistakes? because English was'nt really my first language and I'd be glad to know more from ...

--> in my ow opinion, EMO poetry doesn't really suck, because sometimes emotions keep a poem alive, I guess what makes you guys, hate Emo poetry is it's pessimism. Like ...

--> love this one! :] Anyway, a little correction about the spelling of "wine". "Whine" means complaint and "Wine" means a drink, like white wine, sancerre, champagne.. :]

--> ohh! that's a lovely one! :] -----> i like the red, pink and all that stuff..

summerlovee, :)

CHAPTER THREE Hello, Veronica Marky dropped his body on the soft bed when Ismael left him in his suite. The trip didn't make him tired but bored. He even wanted ...

Hello! My tips in writing stories were few and simple (I think) These were not just my tips about writing but also about being a writer. It's just my ow ...