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--> Dark Vanilla! + I appreciate the corrections! Thank you! I will add your feedback on my compilation. (You see, I should finish the whole story before I work on ...

Dammit, my internet connection logged and so, all the words that I edited and italicized were deleted!! Darn, I don't wanna edit this anymore, it will only eat a lot ...

With dark wings of a presise art, --> I think this should be, "With dark wings of precise art," They cast a glowing light on the too small walls --> ...

walls the seemed so overbearing then --> this might ought to be.. "walls that seemed so overbearing the.." --> about the poem, I like the concept that this poems sent ...

--> I'm a GOOFY GOOBER!! hahaha! (ROCK!) LOL!! --> you know, I'm a Spongebob fan so when I read the title, you already drew me in and I read this ...

Author's Note: Okay, so I was in a hurry to keep "Love Suite" updated so I put a lot of chapters in one topic. I hope that this won't make ...

--> great horror-like poem, :3 --> The words are too deep but I don't care about that so much... c: haha! --> Sorry if I got no corrections, etc. :D ...

---> summerlovee + so glad that you loved Naddie, I was imagining one specific girl that inspired me to 'create' Naddie :3 haha, never knew that I could make her ...

Hiya! This is the edited version (Thanks to SmylinG!) Did I miss something? Just tell! :) Thank you! CHAPTER FIVE THE INVITATION As Ismael walked along the seashore, speaking to ...

--> Thanks for the review, Smyling and Phoenix.. That was all that I wanted when I post my literary works on any website :] ---> SMYLING, yeah, I tried to ...

PROLOGUE My feet sank into the ground. As the earth shook, the ground kept on eating me. I could feel my feet, being burned by the fires of hell underneath ...

---> did you know how freakin' awesome this poem is?? It's so sad but so good, such a beauty, I love the way that you expressed sad emotions here even ...

--> fantastic! I agree that our age usually depends on our emotions (and the way we think, I guess). --> beautiful poem about a family. :] I really love this. ...

sorry, if I wasn't good at understanding poems... how come that the title of this one is Ode to Moose?? Just wonderin' :) love, CS

--> I'm so glad you liked it guys, although I am having some troubles with the grammar and spelling :] Smyling>> you read my mind :] I'm not gonna tell ...