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~ Taylor! + Thanks a lot for the suggestion. + Yeah, I guess, I really need help with grammar so I appreciate your suggestion in the spoiler. :3 ~ paperbackheart ...

Yehey! Writer's block is gone and so, I'm done with chapter nineteen, so here it is with chapter 18! These are the flashback chapters of "Love Suite"- wherein, Marky had ...

I hope you'd like the story! Mandy's mom was driving her car along that dark highway. Mandy used to be that young five-year-old toddler, who sat beside her mother and ...

--> hi! :3 --> since the others have given out the corrections already, all that I could suggest is try to let the words rhyme with each other.. :3 well, ...

:] wow! this poem's great! I wasn't really good at Maths but I truly get what you mean! :3 good job!

+ Whoa, great poem. It was truly dramatic in a sense that it gives me the concept that the guy /speaker of the poem was suiciding. :] + Well, I ...

--> hi, Perse!! :) (can I call you Perse, instead?) --> wow, this is a very neat poem with a good format too. :] --> nothing else to say, I ...

+ hello, jas! I think this is my second comment to your works. :3 + first of all, I don't care about the rhythm, poem structure, syllable count, etc. It's ...

+ You know, Upile, you captured what I feel about my home. My parents told me that we would leave this house that I treated as my home when I ...

--> About the concept, I LIKE it! haha! It must be kind of brutal but I was totally fascinated with that type of story/essay/novel (yeah, that's the creepy side of ...

--> cute!

---> I agree about what your poem's message is: journal is our amigo. ---> I don't post long messages and so I'll say that I really like this one! :) ...

+ hello! welcome to YWS too! :] haha! + Hey, you've got a good poem/lullaby there, although what I want right now is to hear the tune :] + I ...

--> thank you sMylinG! I hope that you'd be patient enough to wait because I still have a writer's block.. hahaha! :3 and thanks for all the help. love, CS

--> Hello, Mikko! + Thanks a lot for the help with the corrections, I admit that I really need that. Don't worry, I will edit "Love Suite" when I am ...