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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Abducted

    --> awesome story! wow! wow! wow! If you only knew how i loved the abductor and hated the girl! :3 soo good! :)

    Mar 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue

    --> Hello, Jojo! This is a great prologue! :) Like it! I dunno, I just couldn't give you a feedback about grammars etc because I was just a writer nazi- ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite Chapter 20-21-22-23

    --> summerlovee, aww, thanks! :O ooh, yeah, it was gonna end- hmm, it was sort of sad because I fell in love with my character as well, but I want ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Long Lost Feeling

    Please tell me the meaning you get, and if you know that feeling. I really can't describe it and all my life I've wondered if other people know that feeling. ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: This Moment Is Ours

    --> This one's too good for a new member, keep it up! :3

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: My Own Self-Pitiful Place

    --> aww! nice rhythm! :3

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite Chapter 20-21-22-23

    Hello! So, here, I added chapters 20, 21, 22 plus, chapter 23! :3 Oh boy, oh boy! Two more chapters and it's the end of "Love Suite" (yes, I write ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Deserted....

    --> So, so beautiful, that's all I can say about it! :3

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?

    --> aw! you might say that I have a strange taste in music! But I was hopelessly addicted to 80s and 90s songs and band! Specially, Modern Talking & Blue ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?

    - via internet! :3 I was looking for websites for writers as awesome as YWS! :3 - CS

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite chapter 18 & 19!

    This is such an endearing moment. I'm in love with your characters CS! Great job. --> aww, I also love them so much! :3 Let me know when you've posted ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite chapter 18 & 19!

    --> hello, summerlovee! I know that I'll say this again and it might soudn annoying to repeat "thank you" but I don't get tired saying "thanks" to you! :3 You ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: glory

    --> good story! :3

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: An Unknown Being's Heart

    --> first of all, I really, really like this poem! --> next, hmm, I just don't get why the human have to avoid the speaker- maybe he/she was somewhat paranormal ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Suite chapter 18 & 19!

    --> Thank you Smyling! I will be waiting for the edited version, of course! Thanks a lot, you're my lifesaver ! :D

    Mar 6, 2011


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind