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- wow, wow, wow! :D I dunno what makes me soo in love with this one :D *speechless*

CHAPTER ONE Germany, 1800 Gertrude looked out of the window, and watched the horse-drawn carriages passed by. The horses' hooves created a clomp-clomp sound against the street made of bricks. ...

- I like this poem! :D Ha! But I am confused about this kind of pattern. I like the descriptive poem itself, but I think I am really comfortable with ...

in my own opinion, you've got no problem on how you send your message through this poem- the thing is about the rhyming... O.o you used different patterns here... When ...

Well, say what you want/need to say about this- nicely. PROLOGUE Lady Judy kept walking in the middle of the forest towards her home. There were no instance that she ...

--> Aww! Did you know how I hate those little critters (arachids) ?? Err- well, except butterflies. XD geez, anyway, I think your poem's really good and I don't really ...

Hi, Spike! You know what? I could imagine Jesus Christ telling this to his Father, God. :O Yes, every bit of your poem, I could relate it to him, especially ...

Sorry to spoil your fun, but I am gonna post ten chapters of this story- don't worry, they're short chapters anyway. Just bear with me. ;) Corrections/Suggestions are welcome! :3 ...

--> Hello! Love this poem so much! You even included Cinderella, Snow White, Rapunzel and Sleeping beauty! :D --> I don't think I have to say a critique, I think ...

HellO! Just dropped by to say that I really like this! Don't wanna critique anymore- since the other YWSers had given them. So, I'm here to say how great this ...

:D The others gave the corrections already, so I hope you'll consider them. :D This poem will be a good one, just a little tweaking on the typos/ mistakes. :D ...

--> Unhelpful review? Nah- thanks for letting me know about your feedback anyway! :D

--> wow! *clap-hands* you are truly great! :) So sure that if your "inspiration" read this- he/she will be so happy! *thumbs-up* Good job!

Hello! Hello! I'll do this once so, bear with me :D haha! I also draw, make book covers etc. whoa-whoa, not being an over-achiever something XD Tatort- Moltke _www.keepvid.com__0001.jpg The ...

--> ze cute head :P hmmf, like the colors, really