caitlinko

Thank you all for your critique; it has been taken into consideration... especially about the infodumping. I started this novel two years ago, so the first few chapters haven't been ...

so shiny and silver. I could be carted away and cherished by a crow, and it would be a more pleasant existence, up, all alone, in a nest, than this ...

First off, I'd like to say wow, this is a different sort of story. I love love LOVE modern/fantasy mixes, so I'm thrilled to have found this... and now, for ...

Yay! First reply! Hmm... well. I'm not going to swoon and say it's marvellous, but I do like it a lot. It's not too wordy to the point of being ...

“Now that a new king has risen he has a chance to rise to greatness, more famed and powerful than any of his predecessors. For this to take place, it ...

Introverted? Definitely. But beautifully so, and I was kept interested the whole way through. The only problem I had with it was the sudden change in the narrator's mood. She ...

Not to be rude to other peoples' critiques, I find I must contradict someone else's opinion... nothing personal, 'kay? Starting off with a definition *can* be patronizing, but in a ...