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Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...

Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...

Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...

Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...

Wow, that was an amazing read. I could visualize what was going on, and could still feel the rythem of the poetry. I can't think of any flaws :) Oh, ...

The world around the building was engulfed in flame. At its severe angle, the four-story condominium was almost a mirage to the city behind it, like an optical illusion. A ...

Definitely the King. I love him and his music to death. I love hearing good things about him, and I definitely appreciate this tribute. I hate the devil remarks. And ...

"Michael Jackson has been pronounced dead," the reporter announced gravely on the Nightly News. His simple sentance was followed by a long video, praising Jackson's life as King of Pop ...

Well, hello my friend (okay, that line sounded freakin' creepy when I read it in my head... Anyways...) You know I am Grammarzilla, so poetry doesn't apply very well with ...

I sat in our family room, watching the news with a tall glass of sweet tea. The screen beheld a shocking scene, Michael Jackson rushed to a hospital's ICU, now ...

Changing eye color? That's not only wrong, but it's kind of selfish. Think about it; it's a baby, a baby that will grow up to be an adult with its ...

hello, it's me (again). After being a smarter person and reading through what others have posted on this forum, I have decided to try again, this time announcing a bit ...

I kind of suck at reviewing right now, so I'll just try my best not to run on: I thought the emotion in this piece was really relatable, and that's ...

Wow, do I love this poem! Really, amazing job! (this is my first critique, so forgive me if I rant on) One thing I loved was the repetition, how it ...

Heyy just sayin' hello... And begging. I really don't know how to get friends on this, so... COULD SOMEONE PLEASE BE MY FRIEND??? I'd love it :P And, yeah, I ...