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Thank you for your help! I added more sensory details to the first paragraph and I think it reads better,

So it's actually the first few sentences from the story. Basically, the MC has been hospitalized for a little longer than a month now. She has gone into heart failure ...

I wasn't exactly sure where to put this but this seemed like the best place... Anyway, this is an excerpt from a fanfiction that I'm currently working on. The squeeze ...

Thank you for all the welcomes everyone!

So, as the title may suggest, I'm really bad at things like these but, hi, I'm Bwi. I'm a seventeen (soon to be eighteen) year old aspiring novelist. After many ...