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Although short, i enjoyed reading this and will have to look out the rest. I think most of the grammatical and punctuation mistakes have been pointed out so i won't ...

Although short, i enjoyed reading this and will have to look out the rest. I think most of the grammatical and punctuation mistakes have been pointed out so i won't ...

Hey day tripper. Really enjoyed your story. It was fun, sexy, frank and realistic. It's very with the times and sets an honest interpretation of todays youth - which is ...

Hey Kiki. On the whole i must say i enjoyed your story. It' a sweet little romance that i think has potential. I would say, however, that you need to ...

I’ll never forget the day I met my country girl. I arrived in Nashville, Tennessee two days ago. The first night I spent in my hotel, The Doubletree, just off ...

Certainly interesting. A little bit random for my tastes although some of the imagary wasquite strong. The paragraph: but one day she looked at me and she fainted at the ...

A clever poem. I wasn't sure what it was about until the end, then it made total sence. I loved the bleakness and fear expressed by the pig, especially in ...

Ok, so most people here seem to take themselves very seriously, so i thought i'd lighten the mood a bit. In all seriousness though, i'm not sure what i was ...

Dark thoughts, hate and violence. Can’t stop them coming, invading. Tearing at me from inside my head. Pulsating, throbbing, aching to be set free. Shredding apart all reason left within ...

An interesting poem, i love the anger/amgst thing. I do, however, agree with some of the other reviewers. This does seem a bit rough, the puctuation and grammar needs some ...

I have to say i didn't quite understand the poem, perhaps i havn't got quite the imagination that i thought. :D Although some of the imagary conjured was quite strong, ...

Thanks for the welcome guys! I wouldn't be too impressed with the published work, after all they're only self published! :D I'll definately bare in mind reviewing as much as ...

Hi everybody, My name is Nick, i just joined today with the hope of getting some of my work out there and to get some of my already published work ...