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Another short story i'm working it. It's still a little rough around the edges, so any comments are welcome. Chapter one April stood at the edge of the bath. Bending ...

I can't say I'm an artist or have any creative skills other than writing, but i thought this drawing was great. I love the edginess and almost dramatic feel to ...

Hey. As I'm suffering an intolerable bout of writers block at the moment, i thought I'd do what I've been meaning to for ages and review some of your work, ...

Thanks for all the comments guys, i appreciate it, so does she.

I may get in trouble for this, but sod it. I'm all for constructive criticism, I think it’s essential in helping new and young writers develop and improve. However, you ...

I'm still working on a few bits and pieces and thus havn't submitted anything for a few days, so I've got another poem ready to keep my "fans" happy :D ...

Although the message was clear, the language wasn't. I have to agree with the others, having every word mixed up doesn't work, it's not how dyslexic people write. My sister ...

I liked this for some reason! :D I've actually written a poem in a similar style, just one word lines, i might submit it having seen someone else attempt it. ...

So, it's not actually the day my world collapsed, but that of my best friend ????? who, for this story, will be called Charlie. Two years ago she was raped ...

Great ending to what could be a great novel if you ever write it! :D I thought the imagary and descriptions were fantastic. The language was simple which made it ...

Good start to the book, i'm sure a lot of teenagers will be able to relate to her confusion and anger. The main thing i would say is that this ...

I watched an old film starring Heathcliff, It made me laugh and cry, Why is it that the good die young? I always ask myself at night. I laid my ...

great little poem, loved the imagary! the only thing i would say is to sort out your punctuation and where you're breaking your sentances. Other than that i think it ...

hi there! I definately wouldn't say this was a rubbish poem. but at the same time i'm not sure whether it is good or bad! :D The language you use ...

hi there! I definately wouldn't say this was a rubbish poem. but at the same time i'm not sure whether it is good or bad! :D The language you use ...