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Re: When I Fell Pregnant [February]
14th Of February David came over today, at six in the morning! He had a bag full of toast and my favourite cereal, Weetabix, along with orange juice and a ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Which way chapter two
Hello! Here is my review. I liked it. It was still short, like the first chapter, but it was good. Here are you few things I want to go over. ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [January]
OMG! Thank you for such postive comments. I really appreciate it :wink:
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: I need the advice of my fellow writers!
You may need to do research if you want this to be accurate. I don't even know what alhmizers (I think that's spelt wrong) but you may need to look ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Sheeeeep!
OMG! The cuteness of these fluffy white cotton balls is so overwhelming! I want to kiss a duck. :D :D
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Sam I Am (Prologue)
Hey, no don't do that! It would be good if you changed it here and there. It would be sad to just give it up. Poor thing. Lonely, sitting there. ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: When I Fell Pregnant [January]
1st Of January Oh how the year flies by. Twenty-four days until I go back to University. I so don’t feel up to it though, since Boxing Day I’ve been ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (0)
I really liked the tension and the atmosphere of the whole thing. It's almost like your there with her, wanting to comfort her but you can't. I did enjoy it ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Which Way Prologue and Chapter One
Hey! I really like it but I just want to point a few things out. "She’s a daredevil, but I’d rather read a book than be talking to a toad. ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him *1*
It would be nice if you put why she hates him. Like said before, it's annoying that there isn't even a sentance there to say why. Overall, I thought is ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: The Diary Of Harriet McCully Chapter 3
Christopher has been showing me around the place where he lives. It’s called Crossroad Village. It’s a small town, with a sweet shop, a dentist and a bank in. The ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Tesseract - Chapter 2
This is a really good chapter. I'm just wondering where the first chapter is. This is a short but snappy piece, and it works really well. Just remember after any ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Gettysburg Chapter 1
Ooh, I do like it. The way you describe the twins, it's really good. And it almost like I know the two girls in person. I didn't find anything that ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: The Kerrington Woods
Ok, I want to expand on this now. When a different character speaks, you have to make a new line. This is vital as it can, will, confuse the reader ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Genre Battle
I mainly like comedy and dramatic. And a bit of romance here and there. :o :wink:
Feb 28, 2011